That was interesting! It had some good elements,like the surprising turn of events that made the game creepy and the general vibe was good.
But some things didn't stand out as good. The fact that you have to wait for the eyes to spawn before you try again, the fact that the platforms did not stand out from the background that much, the dull character,etc. It's a shame because you can see that you put great effort to other things like cinematography,creepy vibe etc,which was really good! It seems like you run out of time! But everything that you put time into it was great! ;)
Also it kept me there to finish it,sooo, good job!!! :D