I really enjoyed the narrative of the segment that I played. The art was great and it's pretty impressive to have a save system set up and working so nicely! Would've been awesome to have some audio though. Great job!
We can't take full credit for the save system. The engine we used is called RenPy (a python based Visual Novel engine) and one of the great features it comes with is this save/load system. Definitely check it out!