sweet little vn. i love how much of a hater dominik is. old man's just FED UP with people's shit
as for feedback, the final illustration had dominik hidden behind the text box. you could've moved the entire picture up to show both martin and dominik and get rid of that wasted space above martin's head. but other than that everything's sweet
edit cause i thought up some additional feedback, this time for the writing: the pacing was excellent for most of the story but the final musings between dominik and martin felt really abrupt. they could've used some more screen time