The lack of completed pictures as I go through this wrecks the whole "in the moment" feeling. I could even handle the incomplete and badly drawn pictures of the car and Anwar if it was emphasizing her lack of awareness because she was in pain, however it just keeps going. Also at the point of **Spoiler incoming** "We are home and you're mistake caused me a great deal of agony!" she would have insisted the game was over or the marriage would be, just saying.