Nice use of the community-made sprites from NovemBEAR! I’m glad the descriptions for each route were balanced and explored unconventional TFs in a fun way. I was worried for Wes for a moment, and am relieved it didn’t go too far. It does need a bit of proofreading, and at times was unclear who was the current narrator, but overall it’s another sweet TF entry. I also recognize some BGs from your other VNs, so I’m not sure if the “painted” BGs are new, but I liked them the most.