hello and thank you so much for your reply ! i would be happy to give a hand in editing & proofreading. i'm actually currently studying english in university, so i could definitely help with that, especially since i will be on break soon. let me know if/when you need any help, and you can email me at mcrunchychris@gmail.com.
i was also wondering how you're planning to handle (at least in my opinion) the very queer coded relationship between sinclair and demian, but feel free to not answer if you're uncomfortable. thanks again for the response, have a great day :)