I don't think it was your intention but I couldn't help but chuckle when the writing was being immersive and very well-paced in certain part, then you see the first silhouette in the story and "she" appears with a totally unexpected artstyle. Man, that sure was an entry! haha
Too bad the choices don't affect anything and the use of the folklore seems rather unrelated but the writing was very good.
PD: In the intro poem, "devil" doesn't rhyme.