Hm. Just picked up and started the game and it looks good so far. One thing of specific note however is repetition of lines at various points.
I'm not that far in yet (heading to the tech institute) but I've hit three points where lines are functionally repeated. It looks like you rewrote them a few times and forgot to pick one and remove the others.
I can only go loosely, but the first was a choice talking to Olivia about what you were most excited for coming up i believe... and you have to pick all of them to progress with MC referring to multiple as explicitly "most excited about".
The second was talking to uncle and i think a line about new beginnings and finding yourself cropped up at least three times in short order.
Last one so far is MC exclaiming how advanced auri is, and auri saying she's designed to be a really human-like smart program, if not a true AI, three times back to back right before the car stops to help someone.