Been playing this for about an hour now, the characters look rather good and not just plain stock model with just different hair, clothes and body type.
Dialogue feels somewhat blant in some places but at least I didn't find any grammar mistakes (so far) but I did see some missing "." and spaces between words. Some of the transitions feel... sudden? Same goes for the H-scenes or at least the second one. I'm honestly not sure if the animation are made by the dev or just stock animations provided by the engine. Choice selections are a bit too dark in my opinion, literally had to move closer and squint my eyes to see what it said.
The reason on how the MC is suddenly able to cast/create magic isn't explained and also feels sudden. The scene where MC fights... Derak? Derek? Feels unfinished and rushed, but hey, at least the magic looks cool, right?
Overall not a bad VN so far, could use slightly more polishing, probably would recommend to a friend at some point.
On the side not, is there a discord server for this game? If not, is it planned to be made? It would honestly be a good idea to make one.
Thank you for your attention and goodnight.