A good start for your first vn... I'm sure it was a great learning experience. 😅
I know you have far more ambitious future stories in mind, and hopefully taking this first big step will help you feel more confident with those in the future.
I'm glad you told the story you wanted to tell; for my first attempt at making a vn, the most eye-opening part was sitting through watching others read through and comment on it, but ultimately, I know it helped me to see my shortcomings and start improving.
(For full disclosure, I did assist with some custom art assets and proofreading some parts of the script).