You wrote 'memeber' at the start of the play in browser
also in the bonus character sex scene, you wrote 'you ass some attention' when he plays with your ass
"I'd ask you to get for it but your mouth is shut." I think you meant beg
I can't quite find this one... Edit: there should be a picture attached to this comment. For some reason, it's not showing.
Well fuck... thank you for pointing it out! Write me an email octiwriter@gmail.com and I'll send you a copy of my game.