Heyo! I'm not sure if this game/discussion is still active, but I noticed something off. It seems like you've forgotten to close a variable in the passage 'Kraken's Right Eye' during the 'Treasure of the Four Captains' questline. I recognized it because I dabble in twine- a red box appeared with the words "<<if:$fastreflexes>>..." (image below) I assume this one flew under the radar because it's one of the wrong passages- I wanted to see if there were any secrets inside. I think the variable $fastreflexes is true for my character since I managed to avoid the traps. I can provide character stats and completed quests too if you need, but it's probably just missing parentheses or something. I absolutely love this game and have spent way too much time on it, hence why I found this. Props to you, this is one of my favorite games ever.
Hi! First of all, thanks for the kind words about my game. It's been a couple of years since its release and I'm super happy people are still enjoying it!
Thanks for reporting the bug, too. You're correct that I forgot to close an if-statement. I've added the missing tag and it's all fixed now. (Funnily enough, I've changed PCs since I last edited the game, and the biggest challenge was finding the correct old version of Sugarcube which wouldn't break everything.)
(Also, that's lot of cash, experience and renown!)