Sorry about the length of the reply I did warn I had a lot of ideas I may stick to one idea at a time moving forward. Ok so in regards for the fawn storyline: during the part where she tortures you have a way to endure your way through and gain something to do with masochism with new quests and/or activities regarding that. During the outing with Fawn dealing with public humiliation gain access to more activities to do with that or even become more outright open with it. Some new hairstyles long short and none at all would be nice maybe some aspects of hair fetishism involved maybe? Some new branching paths or some new possible outcomes would be nice. I understand the time constraints of doing all this I've dabbled a little bit on rpg maker mv and it's a bit complicated, but I only ask that you take my suggestions into consideration moving forward I trust you'll provide some interesting content btw very nice job on the game and best wishes
