Having gotten one ending, I find that it's difficult to get back to the beginning; maybe a link from each ending page to the first screen?
Also, the page for the game demonstrates you have an eye for color, which makes it vaguely jarring to see the default colors for twine.
(The blurb and comments section are a little low-contrast, imo, but the entire cover image is gorgeous and easy to read.)
aaaaaa thanks for telling me! i forgot to write a stylesheet fot the game before posting it, so it stuck to the default colours, and boy are they ugly. i wrote one, and tried to fix the contrast issue (please tell me if it's better!). i also added a replay button to each ending! i hope that's better now!
thank you for playing and helping me make this game better!
Sappho's like for you has increased! The (if:) changer should be stored in a variable or attached to a hook.►I don't think this is what was supposed to appear here?
Really? You wouldn't mind helping?
There's nothing before this to do (else:) with.►
Really? You wouldn't get in my way? Try to steal her from me? of course not
