I need to run this game as Administrator on windows, otherwise it crashes immediately.
Also, it's amazing. The only 'problem' (which is very minor) is that sometimes there are dialogue that seems more directed at me, the player, than the character. For example, when selecting a drink at the diner- if I choose a milkshake, Mom says it'd be hypocritical to say no because of what they ordered. I don't think a ten year old would care or understand that, and telling me, the player, doesn't add anything and only takes me out of the moment.
Similarly, describing what characters are wearing when I can see them should just not be there.
Otherwise, amazing writing. I love the art style and I can't believe how much writing has been done that a lot of players will never see. This project just seeps of love, passion and a clear vision. I can't wait to play the rest!