Haha 😅, just read your phantastic contribution to Campus Magnum. Almost instantly recognized your outstanding style. All text there is nice, but yours is still on a different level. You're talented. It's more vivid, graphic and easy to read than most of the rest. (Tho' couldn't translate «out-out-sync cauchony»; yet got the meaning.)
«Young Markus» or «Young Marcus Expanded»? Most probably I've already seen this scene, since I played YM and am playing YMX since forever. Esp. trying to get the classroom rape scene with Marky AOAP. The rape anime is staggering. Currently trying to meet with my bully regularly to see what develops out of it. Campus Magnum is nice, but confusing sometimes. Sometimes writing also lacks necessary detail (not yours). But no matter how expanded YMX is or how fantasiful CM is, Reform School is still the precious jewel among them.
Oh, the eggplant, yes. Didn't give much attention to this one, since I'm not so much into that kinda scene. E.g., in YME, I'm totally ignoring "The Castle" as for that matter. My fav in that app by far was Alex (picture of a young tattooed man looked at from beneath). You're right with Marky, he's definitively missing some nuances of the original. Still nice and I'm currently further exploring his part. I imagined it was a different side of him and that he reserved his nicer sides solely for his special victim from the original story.