So, To Find Yourself demo.
The demo is short but I can get the vibe it is going for and I do enjoy it, we don't get a lot of FVNs outside of USA or Medieval Europe so the world of Haikou do look fresh and unique. Another thing is the quality of the sprites is amazing, an nice balance of fan service and actual clothes and the
There an number of typos which can be easily fixed with an revision. The sprite when changing expressions needing to fade in and out sprites is a bit weird. The music looping does need to be adjusted for long stretches of dialogue so the music don't end and start again. Do keep in mind those things are not to be solved in haste but skills you can develop as you get more experienced with the VN making process.
All that being said I am excited to see how this project will develop and the story will flow, it's very rare to have an more mature and older cast so I do pray that your VN do flourish.