Apple is so adorable in this, and I LOVE the fairy designs!!! The contrast between their neon colors vs the black and white style of the comic works incredibly well. I also really like the fountain and courtyard layout at the very beginning, it's such a small detail but it works super well.
Valia was totally sexy too, even if it was her dream-self, and I appreciate how consistently you draw her. I'm gonna stare at some of these panels for far too long cause of that lol.