this is your writing? you have quite a lot of potential. also you did a very good job on the music, it being your first time making it. you should be proud. good luck on finding an editor and good luck on making the game, i hope it comes out soon.
Thanks! I am undoubtedly proud. We're hoping to complete Benefitship 2 some time next year, but as with before, it depends on the artist's schedule. I hope you'll enjoy that when it eventually comes out.