I actually did enjoy this game a great deal the grammar and typo's weren't too bad comparatively to some games the story was still easy to understand which is the main thing. Game has a few glitches which made me start over cause I'm dumb and I didn't save if you go in the market where the delivery girl works you can't get out if you take a certain path in the town before the fight it resets the town so you can't progress and just have navina following you. Overall very well done for a first attempt my game play here: