Ok, so i'll give some constructive criticism the start is just not that good. I'm not truly engaged in said story im sorry, its not the worst but the dialog feels forced no natural banter. On top of that the humor seems like you're trying to hard. Also could you stop the Dora explora like monolog a little? him breaking 4th wall just takes away even more from the feeling in the game. Easier ways to just explain the surrounding of your home was to do chores a few remarks on the area but acting like a literal host and looking at the camera is annoying and not funny or "quirky" other than that I see potential if you keep chipping away at the minor details I've pointed out the game would be OK.
Update: I judged to quickly after finishing chapter 2 and 3 I have to say it was enjoyable I still stand by my previous judgment of the first chapter though rocky start but got a lot better progressively suggest others to give the game a go