When interacting with Karia’rashi after completing Feast for a Dragon quest, maybe remove the Make an Offering option, because when selecting it and then try to back out, it'll replay the dialog for finishing the Feast for a Dragon quest. And also maybe move Brookes and Jill's VN art to be in front of Karia’rashi, because she's so beeg that I can barely see Jill. https://postimg.cc/xqcbRD5L
In the slime hang-out when talking to "King" Slime, there a dialog with Jill's icon and no text before going back to normal. That almost made me think the game froze. https://postimg.cc/SYMRp415 By the way, I think there was a nice "The bug becomes a feature" moment.
I'm unsure if this was when transferring my save to the newer version, but the NPC for the Divine Watermelon quest still has the question mark icon indicating the quest is still in progress, even though I've already completed it. https://postimg.cc/B8FJ6pBL
Just out of curiosity, how would Jill look with one more inflated state, would she look similar to Gigi, being like Rayman Origins/Legends bubble?