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After having seen all current content (0.04), I'm ready to say my humble opinion about this game. In short, game has great potential, yet it has some mayor drawbacks:

1. The cut open access acts a way to limit the number of players willing to play the game. They miss high-quality animations without even knowing how great they are. 

2. The english adaptation is bad written. I've seen a lot of 'I'll forgive you' in random sentences where it makes no sense (I think you want to write 'Please' or 'Please, forgive me' instead of that). Moreover, some words are not even translated to English and they're left in Russian.

To solve this, I thought of some possible solutions to help the development of this game. I hope you take them into account!

1. Instead of cutting open access, give sneak peaks to Patrons and Boosty, make them have a version ahead of public access (Like, they would have now a '0.05' and public access would have '0.04'. When you release 0.06 for Patrons, release 0.05 for the public), etc. Make polls exclusive to Patrons to decide which H-scenes to make and put that in one of the many benefits of becoming a Patron.

2. English adaptation is really bad. Try and use Google Translator (or any other) instead and just fix the 'He/Him, She/her' problems it will present (Like when it tries to refer to Eve as He, change it to she). 

3. Make colabs with other authors of Hentai Visual Novels, it'll help you gain more support. 

4.If you ever decided to make an Android Port to this game, I would stronly recommend you to do it as soon as possible. A lot of people play these games on android, so you'll probably get more support doing so.

5. Change your Itch.io profile and add a profile related to the game. 

Finally, I have to say that the game itself is very enjoyable. The animations are amazing and way better than most of the animations of populars VN. You're doing a very good job and I wish you the very best, developer! 

PD: Don't mind the websites where they try and publish your game without your consent. Focus just on giving your supporters what they like or would love to see added to the game.

Happy New Year btw!