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just found this avn the other day and, the writing in this is phenomenal in my opinion. All the characters seem decently realistic, 3 deletional characters who have lived their own lives sperate from the mc and not that they only exist for this story. as for the graphics, not the best I've seen in this engine but, at chapter 3 it does look quite good I'd say.

honestly my only real criticism is a technical one, in dark scenes, character whose name are dark colours, you can't see their names (I noticed it for the character that Blue and Red were talking to in the second to last scene of the 0.3 update)

thank you so much for the kind words! i absolutely agree that my game needs work visually, but i'm happy you agree that it improves as it goes along. i plan on remaking the first chapter entirely at some point for this reason, including updating the animations as i have learned so much since i started. more than anything, though, it means so much to me that you enjoy the characters and writing as that's been the most important aspect to me. I have never seen the word "deletional" omg that's awesome

As for the font being hard to read, that was on purpose for that specific character as you're not supposed to know their name, but maybe it wasn't the best idea xD haha thank you so much again for playing my game!! I hope you will enjoy chapter 4 next month!

rereading my comment, yeah I've never heard of the word deletional before, it was probably either auto correct or me being really tired while I wrote it, and yes, deletional is a real word but no, it was obviously not used correctly, I don't even remember what I meant to write there.