You're my goat for taking the time to write this feedback 🙏 A lot of this is stuff I thought about too, and some of it what I'm actually working on right now. I think the gameplay is really repetitive and doesn't really flow well so I'll be changing the check requests thing and a few other systems. I'll get around to the writing eventually, but gameplay comes first. I'll definitely add some of your ideas too since they're genuinely appealing. If I ever decide to do collab work on this project or any others, you should definitely contact me. I don't have any way to pay tho
I'm glad you like the input.
As for a collab, I would not dare take money right now, since I see my writing as mostly average level right now. But I think I could whip up a few dialogues.
This game is a fun little side projekt for me next to Big Aspirations (where I am also currently working on completing as much as possible).