great game! great video
Actually, the game was fine, however there are a few things I would like to critique about this video. First of all, the editing could use some work. I would recommend looking up a few tutorials on how to edit using softwares like adobe premier pro. Secondly, it would have been better if you had included the face cam throughout the entire video rather than just the first 5 seconds. Something else that you could have improved on is more engaging commentary for the audience. You may want to look into that yourself, but trying to engage the audience is the best way I have found for them not to die of absolute boredom. Also, I recommend using a voice changer from now on since you're current voice makes me think of grading hyenas through a cheese grader. Also you shouldn't include you're "girlfriend" in these anymore. Just some simple criticism...