I really, really, reaaalllyyy love this! The 2000s visual novel artstyle pairs well with Lilith and Gabriel's 2000s emo/scene look, and I love the fashion you drew for Lilith's friends as well. Zoey's gyaru/mcbling look and Zoe's coquette look are extremely cute. Also, I love Lilith! She's a such a cute (and crazy) protagonist. By the way, I have to ask, are both Lilith and Gabriel protagonists? Or is Lilith the protagonist, while occasionally switching to Gabriel's POV? Whatever the case, I'm eagerly awaiting for more updates! :D