Good game so far in consideration for a non-aaa company with limited resources. The combination of mystery and erotic generates a special tension. I played the current version multiple times and I have a couple of criticism und suggestions.
Appearance of the main character: her titts look strange .They are protruding and pointy especially when wearing clothes. I Like the rest of it.
Logical error: How can Stuart masturbate in his room and sit on the entrance stairs at the same time ? Suggestion: on a special time her brother sits not on the stairs and his room door is locked.
About the tentacle scene: In my opion there should be an option to refuse stuarts demand (take something in her mouth) to get her birthday present back. For example she can blackmail him with the cartridge she found in his room.
Train intelligence: It should be possible to train her intelligence similar to train strength or grace. For example with doing homework or reading books. For now I cant figure out how to read most of the educational books or reach 20+ Intelligence.
Inserting objects: Alisa can train her sexual abilities by insertating objects in her holes. At the beginning its limited to the smallest object, then its expands by training to larger objects. The progress can look like this: shaver (dull end) – black marker – carrot – bottle (neck) – cucumber – bottle (bottom) – baseball batt. Btw. why does she need 25 Intelligence to use pussyjuice to finger her asshole in the shower, is this something only professors come up with ? (Alternatively she could just spit on her fingers)
Punishment system: In the current version when Alisa is getting caught stealing, her mother beats her.I have a different idea: Her mother can spank her bare bottom, and when the lewdness is high enough Alisa likes it.