The translation isn't really the best, but I wasn't going to write the comment to make any critics. Rarely I write comments for this types of games, but I'm doing this to say that: The game has potential, potential for a great story and a great outcome. Played the first version almost a year ago, and a lot of improvements have been there. It's clear that you're putting a lot of passion in what you do, and I'm here to say (hoping for a lot more people to do the same) keep it up, storywise the game has nothing to fear against a lot of other mainstreams games on the platform (I've played lots, and this one got me hooked the whole day.) the project is interesting, and I will probably try to support it whenever I have the chance on patreon, everything summed I say once again, keep it up. most of the times games like those who don't make the big impact soon enough, fails and get discontinued, but from the deep of my heart I hope it will reach the good part of the itch.io community because it deserves a lot.
-Dearly, from one of many future players.