Well, i just started playing but i already have 2 things to say.
First, the buttons that come up when you have to make a decision need to be reworked. They're not even buttons, just text with no background, and the text is white, making it very hard to read, sometimes even impossible. This urgently needs to be changed.
The second thing is the grammar, there's a lot of errors, though this isn't as big an issue.
Other than that, the idea of the game is quite interesting, i like it so far.