Hi Leledada,
Oh wow! I think that's very impressive artwork for not having practicing for very long. Drawing human figures is challenging and drawing them in a scene together is even more challenging and drawing them interacting (touching) is even more challenging! A very nice effort!
Also I always respect people who navigate English as non-native speakers, as I am pretty terrible at grammar and spelling, despite 1.English is my only language 2.I'm an avid reader who scored perfect on my language test portion of my SATs and yet I'm still this terrible?? LOL!! I'm not even trying to be humble... my copy edits are objectively TRUE mistake after mistakes!
If you don't mind me asking, do you use use some kind of translation tool or are you learning English? Do you usually play/read games in your native language or do you find more games in English?