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This is a very good game by basically all metrics. The story is compelling, the action is dope as hell, the visuals are beautiful and the worldbuilding is quite good. This is definitely one of the best newer AVNs and I'm excited to see the game realized to its full potential. 

BUT, I do have one small criticism, and that is that the pacing of the story is just a bit too fast. The player barely has time to realize what is happening  before they're thrust into a completely new situation. So I'm a retired soldier? Great! Wait, now I'm looking for my allegedly dead wife? Ok then! There's a spaceship now? Okkkaayy? I'm on a another planet?????? See what I mean? Just slow down man. You've clearly spent a lot of time making these absolutely stunning renders so can you please just give them each a little tiny bit more screen time, pweeese?

 Honestly, it's rare these days to find an AVN game in which the pacing is too fast because to be frank, there are more devs which pill pad the game's runtime with needless incessant yapping because they just have nothing else to do. They don't have the *juice* you know? But YOU do. There is so much stuff in the story, so much background, so much LORE, so can you please just take one or two more lines of dialogue more in each scene to let the player catch their breath or explain what's going on? But otherwise, great game and good work! I cannot overstate how much potential I see in this game and it's story. For now, I eagerly await chapter 2.

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Thanks so much for this, and I will try my best for the future :D