That's a really great story!
I was unsure of how this would turn out since this was made with RPG Maker, but I really liked it!
The only complaint I have is all of those random encounters, just too much. Maybe not my style of game, that's why.
Also, the bosses were too easy, but I think the focus was the story, so thats alright :)
Nice job! You have a good chance of being in the winners