I like your sense of humor and you have a good sense of how big things should be on the screen. I think the gameplay could use a bit more spice, like some kind of second or third thing that happens which might distract you from the farming of moonshine etc. , to maybe expand the management a little, or crank up the challenge a little. But it's a fun idea and I hope you keep going with it.
the V.O. was funny, you should lean into that, consider doing more characters but doing them all yourself (like a hand puppet conversation vibe).
nice work overall!