Thanks for your feedback, I always appreciate constructive criticism. My excuse for the bad pacing is my lack of focus. The problem you pointed out is something i'm well familiar with, and have been trying to steer in the right direction for quite some time now, but it's hard for me to do that because I just want to finish the project as fast as possible because if I take my time, then I will start getting lazy and stop writing for months...like I am doing with my current project. As I have said in previous replies, I will do my best to fix the issues and make an actual good visual novel...someday.
Have a great day