Played toward the game. My 2 cents. This game spent too much time on really nothing and excessive dialogs that are very info sparse. The whole intro took around 30 min and doesn't show much.
This is my first game and in this first demo I wanted to focus on introducing some basic concepts of the world and its characters. In the upcoming 0.2 version, I already plan to make changes to the written story, remove many pauses in the texts and continue with the story. I also now have the help of a writer who has worked on several good FMG games. Hopefully you can give the game a second chance when 0.2 comes out for free ;D