spoilers maybe! IT'S GOOOOD. SUCH VIBES. I loved everything, the plot is very promising (but please don't worry too much about meeting people's expectations, author! whatever anybody writes here, do what you feel like doing.). clive is such a sweetie, the facial expressions are so deliciously drawn, the visuals are amazing in general. (I very liked backgrounds, I must mention it, they're very good)
I'll leave theories to those who likes making them. as for me, I'm just going to enjoy whatever the author has to give us. though I have some ideas about further endings in the full game being like "Good ending: Letting him go (everyone gonna cry)"; "Bad ending: Making him stay forever with you, but you all going to suffer from that yay". :D but it'll be great anyway.
Dariel when I catch you... lol... Dariel's so rude wth. also have some thoughts about him being a secret deity or whatever.
(I'd personally add a trigger warning about emetophobia and nausea mentioning... only if you feel like it)
dear author, please rest enough, only work when you want to, don't feel forced to do anything, feel okay to block those who make you feel bad, just be happy !