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Some quick feedback from a fellow game jammer:

Glow: (What you did well)

1. The game is readable and playable

2. The art fits the theme of the game.

3. The game is engaging (at least on a phone)

Grow: (what you could do better)

1. please change the color sceme of the itch page. I feel like I'm blind writing this...

2. There is no juice, so, paired with a simple game, it isn't fun to play. Please fix this and add some juice.

Overall, this is great for 2 weeks of work. Keep it up!

Thank you for giving it a try. I changed the color of the itch page so hopefully it is better and I will look into this juice concept.

https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=Fy0aCDmgnxg is a good resource for juice.