It's creating a strong atmosphere, I feel like I'm walking through a dead, abandoned shopping mall with super smooth jazzy 80's music still somehow lingering on in the background. Very cool!!!! The arrangement is very evocative of a time period. The song moves from your jazzy chord progression into a less harmonious section, which creates a really nice contrast. I want to hear what it sounds like moving between these two sections for 2-3 minutes; there are many ways you can develop that simple music idea with a tiny bit of structural repetition.
Your mixes are feeling more full and you've created quite an atmosphere here, great submission!