Oh, how this hit me!
It's concise, it's well-written, it's a very strong premise - AND - honestly my favorite thing about it is the design and layout you used. You gave each page so much space, you let the words fully consume the page.
It reminded me of how vast and scary the ocean can be, especially in this context. It made me think about how if I were there in that raft, I might feel like that - both like there was a vastness around me, AND like the folks there in the boat with me were the whole world.
I just wanted to share this reflection. Really lovely game!