Interesting concept, I am really intrigued by the story and the characters. You certainly do have a knack for writing.
Few questions though:
- Will you add more images? It's mostly black background or some character in front of a black background.
- The game tag suggests a Female Protagonist, is it really though? At least in this first version nothing hints towards it. Maybe it's both female and male?
- Is there a reason why you named the project Thalassaphilia? The equivalent, Thalassophobia, is spelt with and o.
I'll be looking forward to more content!