this was a super dark story omg. i know this wasn't a super serious project for you, but i still wanted to give some feedback... i found the pacing to be a bit slow and wished it was just a biiit faster lol. some background noise would've also been cool too. you did an awesome job evoking an emotional reaction from me xD i love games that touch the soul in that way haha. good luck on your next big project!! and thank you!!