No problem, I'm glad I could have helped a bit.
As for suggestions:
-Perhaps in houses that you can break doors to add some items/people for followers to drain as I think only place your followers could use drain were imps in first chapter right after recruiting Lilith as well as their upgrade drains.
- I'd also be happy if there would be some additional scenes, e.g. returning as giant to your kingdom or village in act 2. (Those can be just texts) I am sure minions would be terrified seeing their queen bigger and better than ever as well as previous queen that survived would also be amazed by gigantic Alice :)
- Personally I think that perhaps it would have been better if supreme Goddess tries to stop Alice before she drains more worlds, after feeling 4 worlds just died. Alice may be a bit impatient but I wouldn't have called her stupid. Though I fully understand making it Alice decision to face one who drained her.
- In Epilogue it would have been nice if all previous demon Goddess could be visited as some kind of oracle/grand priestesses that kept a bit of knowledge from lost reality, knowing Alice was best of their kind that ascended to true goddesshood. (Afterall Alice really was respecting them even when she was stronger).
- Lastly small correction of data. Alice with her impresive girth on approx 16.5 m is said to be 36+ metric tons which is way to low. considering average female weigth of 2m is 90kg and Alice has very impressive body it should at least be (90x1,5)x(8.25)^3 which leads to approx 75,8 metric tons. Same top size weigth should be approx 7560 gigantons.