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No problem, I'm glad I could have helped a bit. 

As for suggestions:
-Perhaps in houses that you can break doors to add some items/people for followers to drain as I think only place your followers could use drain were imps in first chapter right after recruiting Lilith as well as their upgrade drains.

- I'd also be happy if there would be some additional scenes, e.g. returning as giant to your kingdom or village in act 2. (Those can be just texts) I am sure minions would be terrified seeing their queen bigger and better than ever as well as previous queen that survived would also be amazed by gigantic Alice :) 

- Personally I think that perhaps it would have been better if supreme Goddess tries to stop Alice before she drains more worlds, after feeling 4 worlds just died. Alice may be a bit impatient but I wouldn't have called her stupid. Though I fully understand making it Alice decision to face one who drained her.

- In Epilogue it would have been nice if all previous demon Goddess could be visited as some kind of oracle/grand priestesses that kept a bit of knowledge from lost reality, knowing Alice was best of their kind that ascended to true goddesshood. (Afterall Alice really was respecting them even when she was stronger).

- Lastly small correction of data. Alice with her impresive girth on approx 16.5 m is said to be 36+ metric tons which is way to low. considering average female weigth of 2m is 90kg and Alice has very impressive body it should at least be (90x1,5)x(8.25)^3 which leads to approx 75,8 metric tons. Same top size weigth should be approx 7560 gigantons.

Thank you for the suggestions!
Yeah, I think items would definitely be the simplest solution. I think I'll go ahead and add some areas that you can break doors and enter for Chapter 4 at least and some in Chapter 2's final city. The imps were kind of a carry-over actually from my original plan where you could choose to drain everyone and such, but I shifted gears in that regard since I figured adding options for everything would quickly get overwhelming for me.

I think you will like the next patch then! The first side story I'm working on is actually related to returning to the first world! Thank you for the suggestion in regards to what could be added there for the return.

Yeah, the general vibe that I was going for was that the Supreme Goddess is arrogant and thinks that Alice is beneath her and therefore, she can't be bothered to deal with Alice. I'm not too sure how well that works though or if it was even a good idea in the end.

That could be a neat idea, yeah. Originally, one of the ideas I had was to have a true ending which you could only gain on New Game+. The true ending would involve that each of your followers would gain the essence of each of the goddesses and essentially replace the goddesses with Alice replacing the Supreme Goddess. So, she would have made her own pantheon of goddesses in the original true ending, but it was kind of scrapped due to feature creep as a lot of stuff has been.

And thanks for the correction there. While I was making the heights and weights, I wanted to make them somewhat accurate, but in the end a lot of the numbers were kinda just pulled out of nowhere, I didn't put too much thought into it. I did want to make them on the heavier side though, since I have seen some people make hyper muscular characters weigh very little, but in the end, for me at least, it's hard to get a frame of reference for how much someone would weigh at such an extraordinary size, so thank you for the feedback. 

I appreciate all the feedback you've given! If you have more feedback to give, I think maybe doing it via discord might be more handy, but if you prefer to do it here, then go right ahead. I appreciate the feedback nontheless! ^^

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Sure, having discord contact will surely help a lot. If you have server for game I'd gladly join too :)