This is one of my absolute favorite games from the jam, everything is incredibly well done from the art, story, and attention to detail. Aside from just a couple typos, and getting stuck fairly early on (skill issue on my part), my real criticism has already been pointed out (the transitions and text are a bit slow overall).
I was expecting the game to be pretty short for how polished it is, but I was pleasantly surprised that it’s a fairly long, cohesive narrative. Amazing stuff.