This excelled in the little things. The font choice! When I noticed the hearts over the lowercase i, combined with the hover state changing size -- those are the kinds of things hypertext fiction does so well.
I said this about Raven & Cardinal, but it bears repeating: more enthusiast IF should look into voiceovers. It gives a lot of life to the characters.
In the writing there was some stuff that I wish was approached with more nuance - having the "I'm aroace" discussion twice seems like a missed opportunity to show different reactions, and the size difference was played for laughs a few times but otherwise not really referenced. With the size difference, I wonder if the big/small dynamic could have played into those hover states: when Eu felt small, the text getting large and overwhelming; when they stand up for themselves, the thing that they say becoming miniscule in the moment? Or Eu's yellow text hover state always being different than Gabe's?