You saying that you're not a hater at the end is just hypocritical...
There's a clear line between constructive feedback and just plain hating, and I think you realise very well that you've crossed it.
You're criticizing an amazing piece of art (I think everyone agrees DawnChorus is fantastic <3) so you better give some valid points, Which you failed abismally.
This VN is not just another regular smut story, so there will be actual character development and some characters might not even be gay at all (Travis?? idk though). And if you can't handle that Arvo and Mikko have a heartbreaking history, met eachother after YEARS and Arvo can't say "I still love you" after 3 days..? Then just get out.
Also don't go at Lake like that. If you can't accept that someone in your life identifies as non-binary, then you definitely do not deserve them.
To summarize;
If you have actual feedback, tell the DawnChorus team!
If you only came here to be a total dick, then just shut it.