I'm a huge fan. The opening is fantastically orchestrated, and though I honestly wasn't in love with the sudden inclusion of a drum beat, the beat was actually simplistic enough that I didn't feel it took away from the mystical, ethereal feeling of the opening. For the sake of suggesting an improvement, it would have been cool to see a bit more variety in the bassline, maybe a bit of melodicism even, as although their entry at 0:26 is very satisfying, that bassline then remains the same for the rest of the piece. Nice work 👍
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Thank you so much. First time someone's told me they are a huge fan. I appreciate your criticisms too.
Good point with the drum beat, don't like it either, xame outta nowhere. I made my audience expect something majestic and calm. And then I got em' with the schizo drums jumpscare for some reason. If I could start over, I would've taken the entire middle chunk in a more natural direction lol.
And the waltz bassline never changing. Completely slipped my mind. Didn't even notice it lol.