Oh my gosh, the title you picked for your video was so unexpected I choked on my water, lol thanks for the laugh. Expert or not, I 100% agree on your opinion that some parts are rushed; if I wasn't under the threat of an impending deadline, the whole thing would (probably) be more refined lol. Regardless, I'll try to do better next time (even though I'm just gonna keep experimenting with stuff hoping it works, hehe). I'm honored to have this as your first recorded visual novel and you got my respect for reading the whole thing out loud, but please get some rest lol. Thank you and take care!