That's some nice Lost Vikings/Thomas Was Alone -type gameplay! Love the characters, writing and the aesthetics. My biggest criticism is that it's too short, I was looking forward to seeing the concept elaborated on further. Smaller gripes: The inability to let go of a ladder by jumping or pressing left/right, and the timers on the texts. It's generally better to let players read at their own pace and then press a button when they want to move on.