I really wanted to beat this one, since I'm trying to play all your games (Except your very first since it seems pretty long) because they're short and fun and have fun characters... but I just can't. The jankyness of the first game was manageable since it was simpler, but in this it's way too much to handle. I'm sure its possible to beat with a better understanding of the game and some powerful cheese, but I have neither of those.
I see that you remade chapter 1, which I haven't played yet, so my critiques are more advice to others who download this than things I wish to be fixed since I assume this will be revamped eventually too. Onto the next game!